All Comments on 'Medusa: Fate's Game Ch. 16'
by NovusAnimus
- 16 Comments
Anonymousover 5 years agoPut this story to print/e-books and TAKE ALL OUR DAMN MONEY! You are a phuqing marvel of the written word! You have managed to weave a story that has wrenched EVERY conceivable emotion there is out of your readers! I have only told one other author on this site this; turn this story into a series like the Harry Potter books and to increase both your audience and profit margin, amend/change the sex scenes so that teens can also purchase the book. It’s the same thing they do in the music industry by having both a clean and dirty (profane language, sexual content) copy. This story is so kick-ass, I’d purchase multiple copies; 10 hardback copies to give as gifts, 1 paperback copy to read, 1 paperback copy for the bookshelf in my bedroom (untouched and pristine) and 1 hardback copy for the bookshelf in my living room. NEVER STOP WRITING, EVER! When you use my ideas, don’t forget to pay me my 2.7% of the gross profits. Thanks again for sharing your beautiful talent with us. It’s much appreciated!
Rockstar601over 5 years agoYes, Novus Animus, you are by far in my top 3 authors on literotica , IMO. If you were to print e- books let me know so I can prepare to throw it your way...
Admiralbird348over 5 years agoJust Epic! The way you described him putting Medusa back in her body was some of the best writing I’ve ever read. NA you are really a gifted writer. Thank you so much for writing for us:))
NovusAnimusover 5 years agoAuthorThanks for the support! Hopefully my Patreon succeeds, so I can continue writing.
TheDesirable0neover 5 years agoThis story was an amazing read from start to finish. I love all the characters that you have created and I hope that you never stop showing off your creativity and writing prowress. Although this story may be at an end, I am definitely looking forward to whatever exciting worlds you have in mind for us all. Thank you very much, and keep up the good work!
Smutolover 5 years agoEnding is too prolonged for me. I get that there is to be sex scene but .. it was kinda hard to read for me even though i liked the previous encounters. I read and read for something to happen in the end but there is nothing. Good story though i must admit i liked previous parts way better
NovusAnimusover 5 years agoAuthorI can agree with that, Smutol. The double sex scene at the end with no story between was bad pacing on my part.
Anonymousover 5 years agoBitching out and having him not wreak havoc on the gods was just pathetic. Massive case of rage blue balls.
Anonymousabout 5 years agoLoved the characters, the emotions, the action.
I agree with some previous comments: The last chapter held a bit to much sex, but it's not an "unworthy" end.
Thank you very much for this wonderful story!
Keep writing!
Anonymousabout 2 years agoYour first version was good, not just “thrown together”. If not, then why did people read and remember it?
This rewrite was excellent. Now it is a true epic, as befits the setting and plot. I particularly liked the revision’s increased romance. Good story, well told. Thank you.
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