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"Yeah," she replied.
"Since, your going to have to leave tomorrow, you know, to find Medusa or something" he said, noticeably disappointed,"I just want to tell you that you were great. I..I mean, it's nice to have someone like you around, someone that cares,"
Jade had fucked many men and many women before, It was her job after all. In fact, she fucked so much that she never really felt intimacy between her and her partner. With Adric, this intimacy returned and she really did enjoy what they had just shared. She was a priestess of love and she had many admirers but this time, it was her turn to admire someone else.
"Hey Adric," she whispered,"I have a long and dangerous journey ahead of me, do you really think I want to do this alone,"
"What are you saying?" He said, thinking he knew where this was going.
"Want to come with me?" She said smiling and kissing him lightly on the lips. Jake was ecstatic and he couldn't think of what to say. All he did was kiss her back and smile. He had a hard time sleeping, but when he finally did get to sleep, he dreamt of things to come.
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Aphrodite looked upon the two lovers, and grinned, she was happy they were getting along. She was glad that Jade had found the elf she had wanted but she knew this was just the beginning. Medusa wasn't a typical monster, she had feelings, she had a soul, and that made her a lot more dangerous. Not only was she clever and skilled in magic but she was very elusive, even with her help, Jade and Adric would have a hard time reaching her lair.
She had hope though, after all, she wasn't planning on them making their journey alone. There would be others joining their crusade eventually. But even with companions, it was going to be a rough mission. Even with divine help, Medusa was a worthy foe to the most powerful of warriors, and this time, she was out for vengeance. Aphrodite had to admit, she was worried.
Suggestions? Should I continue with the lactation thing or should I kind of put it in the back seat? And yeah just general ideas for where you want the story to go next and how you think I should improve, that always helps.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoFirst...get an editor if you're serious, there were several simple errors that could have been fixed easily..."there" instead of their, fairy tail (it's fairy tale) and at one point Adric became Jake for a sentence.
Second, decide on the world you want, you're far too muddled. You can't have it every way. Just because you think it would be cool for there to be orcs and elves in a Greek mythological world doesn't make it a good idea, it's kind of like if you wanted to write a story in Middle Earth but then thought it would be cool if the X-Men showed up...also if you're trying to use Greek gods, don't be referencing Rome. It really seems like it would have been better for you to build your own fantasy world with gods and goddesses, that's what it seems like you want.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoWaiting eagerly for your next chapter... Nice one. Pen down next one
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoYou should keep the lactation, it gives the story some interest into the lives of the two protagonists.
JamesSkellingtonalmost 8 years agoThe lactation is great, I would definitely keep it in the story.
