by Rob_mDear
Great to have a long awaited return to the fabulous Mouse series. I can recall that you considered more chapters to the series as a result of keen fans' requests. Thank you for one of my all time favourites.
As I read this story I'm listening to three songs by Johnny Cash ( Hurt, Ain't no grave, God's gonna cut you down) and I'm amazed by how it seems to go with reading the story and how it makes me feel. I love incest-romance and don't think there's anything wrong with it as long as their both consenting adults, as does the law I believe, says the same thing.
I loved this story. It has a special significance for me and I especially liked the ship figurehead comparison. I haven't read the other "Mouse" stories, but now I will!
Like the way Mouse stood up to Melanie and the way they both go through their own Torment and Worries.
a very good Addition to the "Mouse Series".
Hickory dickory dock,
The Mouse sat on the cock.
The cock struck one,
The Mouse leaked cum,
Hickory dickory dock.
As usual, an impeccably written story from the best dream weaver on Lit!
you...tease! I thought perhaps you had decided to alter the depressing assed ending to the original mouse series. alas, I suppose it is not to be. But I maintain that there is no way Mouse would've let that blonde bitch have Michael. They bloody well should've stayed together. Other than that, though, your writing is excellent as always.
-anubelore
I loved the Mouse stories very much. I am glad you added this. When reading the stories i always wished there was more, like what happened after she finally came back to him in the end. How they raised the kids, those stories. Keep writing and Thank you.
Mouse is special. I'm glad you let her come back, even for only a few pages.
This was a great addition to the Mouse series. I loved how she handled Melanie. I only wish you would write about Mouse's pregnancy and Michael's reaction to the pregnancy. Keep writing.
Fuck. That was so damned good. Sigh. :)
I'm actually afraid to read all of the other books... I don't want to suffer through their early misery and I'm afraid of where they might not end up. :/
I suppose I'll have to read it all eventually... But not today. Today ended on a magically delicious high note!
The sister I never had, but wished that I did, with that perfect little body type I love and the personality to match. ...and my name is Michael. It couldn't be better unless she were twins ;)
Thanks for the great implanted memories!! ;)