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by 2Write2Live

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Personally, i just don't like your writing style.

You have a great base for a brilliant story thou and I'm sure others will enjoy it.

Just lacks the "flow" i prefer.

Don't be disheartened though. Keep going and enjoy your writing process.

2Write2Live2Write2Livealmost 7 years agoAuthor

Thank you for your comment. I encourage you to send me direct feedback. What kind of writing style do you like? I can't address something of which I am not aware.

jenorma2012jenorma2012almost 7 years ago
Not bad

This sounds like a ranch in Vegas, except it is run by one woman, still not a bad story

2Write2Live2Write2Livealmost 7 years agoAuthor

Thanks for your comment. I don't recall seeing any meadows in Nevada. I did see some beautiful aspens, though, in Great Basin, NP.

rml65rml65almost 7 years ago
Wonderful story!

Enjoyed it very much! Looking forward to reading more from you!

2Write2Live2Write2Livealmost 7 years agoAuthor

Thank you for your comment.

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