All Comments on 'Meet Marge and Shelly'

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WetPantyFetishWetPantyFetishover 6 years ago
Labia Lips

Just a little lesson on words to the Author. The word "labia" means lips. so, one can say vaginal lips, cunt lips, pussy lips, OR labia. To say labia lips is like saying lips lips. wow wow your your cunt cunt lips lips are are so so big big. Yeah, everyone should join the new fad, and echo your stories to us. To re-iterate what everyone always says here, get an editor, or proof reader, or let it sit a day or two and come back and re-read it.....nah scratch that last part, you don't understand the English language well enough to matter.... I.E. get an editor.

2Write2Live2Write2Liveover 6 years agoAuthor

Thank you for your comment. I will keep that in mind going forward.

Darla7000Darla7000over 6 years ago
Just awesome!

So,so erotic ! The world would be a more beautiful place if there were more mothers like Marge.

2Write2Live2Write2Liveover 6 years agoAuthor

Thank you for taking the interest to comment. I will keep your suggestions in mind in my future stories.

2Write2Live2Write2Liveover 6 years agoAuthor

Darla7000: Thank you for your nice words. I am pleased that you enjoyed the story. We need to do a better job teaching our young people about sex. How we are doing it, doesn't seem to be working.

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I've come to realize that writing is great for the mind. It keeps one young. I enjoy reading erotica. Thus, a great genre in which to begin. All of us are different. As a writer my objective is to get you involved in the story. Not too much detail, just enough to get your mind...