All Comments on 'Meet Miss Brown'

by eliasrotica3

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ChrispeChrispeabout 11 years ago
Very Erotic

A very well written and erotic story. I hope that you continue with it.

kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxabout 11 years ago

OH GOD YES!!!

*long cold shower.....

................................

Still showering....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
FANTASTIC

Wish I could find a cottage like that, with a girl like Emery!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
do not end it yet

You need to add another chapter to this story. To see if they fall in love and their future together. It could be that Emery and Jenny go to visit Emery's mother in the hospital and give her the good news. And Jack/Jenny could make more stays at the lake to visit Emery. They might have a 3 way with Jenny and Emery and her mother. And Jack might know of a way to help promote the resort so that it could be profitable. Maybe cross-dressers hide a way weeks where the guests do not have to worry about being found out.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
very good

this story is awesome plz continue cowboy5548 yahoo instant masgr give me a holler we can chat

PattiJPattiJabout 11 years ago
Its good, another

It is a very good, well executed story deserving of another chapter or more. Please consider writing more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
IT WOULD BE MY DREAM COME TRUE

It is something I have dreamed of all my adult life as a cross dressing male

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
agree

good story, even if real, would love to know if another chapter is coming.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
beautiful story

very nice story, the good guy wins, I only wish stories like this were real. good going. the characters are believable and the situation fits. great writing...

Tootight1Tootight1almost 10 years ago
terrific story

loved your story. there is room for chapter 2 you know.

Tootight1Tootight1almost 9 years ago
2nd read

still a beautiful story, and needs a second chapter, please.

cdCindy1cdCindy1almost 6 years ago
loved this story

Wonderful story. I agree that another chapter would be great. Please continue and also tell more stories of Jack as Jenny. I too am a CD and this story made me feel special. Thanks again.

Ritacd0Ritacd0over 5 years ago
Another chapter would make my day, One day!

Another chapter would make my day, One day I'm sure you will make the idea a reality!

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