All Comments on 'Meeting'

Come on, give me some more here! What's her name?

Her name is Leila.

Why do I always forget to just reverse the roles when I want to punch the sadist character in the face?

Okay, very good. And so, so terrible. She should have stayed away. The sadist is going to be in a state of terror if she just leaves again. Ask me, been through it.

But then again- he's male, so let it suffer. Ha!

Thanx for story

You set the scene - then nothing

You do create some tension - now, tell the story. The tension must be resolved - and if all you can offer is the narrator's abject surrender to whatever sexual demands the guy makes - well, it's not very inventive, but it is better than nothing

I don't mind so much the first bit to set the scene, but you and I both know that more often than not most authors don't finish their stories. If you have ... then you suck! You left us with what? A vision of two sexual beings having a cocktail anticipating? I'll remember your name ... trust me.

Where is the story?

Where's the story ??

Stupid!