All Comments on 'Meeting Daddy in the Past Pt. 04'

Wow....just wow. You are a good. Keep it up. This story just fets better and better.

Well, if you don't believe in the multiverse theory of time travel, this is very, very good. Creepy as hell, but very good as well. Curious to see where it goes.

Could Seth be his own father?

That would be an interesting paradox.

I didn't think you could make this story better, but you did. I am curious as to who the baby actually belongs to. Is it her daddy's or is it seth's? It is a quandry. I can 't wait to see where you take this story. I give it 4 stars. Keep writing and I will keep coming back to read more.

You can't be serious. Even your stories are getting shorter because you're barely managing to think of anything and it shows. Should've stopped at chapter 2.

the twistier this gets, the better - and it's just fun to think that since none of us have actually proven that the "immutable" laws of physics - as we continue to re-write them - can't be at least elastic enough for a good bit of fantasy such as this - "Edge of Tomorrow" anyone? :)

Seth may need to explain his own relationship with the "good" Doctor, but yeah, being his own father could be just a bit much

let's just see where / when ms Naughty takes us next

this story has gone downhill since you introduced the son, a real shame

and undo this story

I wondee how this will turn out.

...it is entertaining to read. The twist is Dr. Samuels becoming her 'mom' but I don't see how you can resolve this, with first Danielle going back and now Seth going back.

It makes me sad to know that her daddy marries someone else and forgets all about her... :(

This story has the twisties, yeow. Fantastic! I'm very interested to see where you take this.

ACK! I don't know how to feel about this! I've really been enjoying the story so far, but her son showing up freaked me out. I mean, it was kinda cool at first, even liked that he was watching, but I've never really been a fan of mother son stuff, and I can't believe that her dad remarries. I really liked him! He seemed like a really good guy to her! But still what I'm most worried about is the paradox. If he stops her from going back for her dad, then she'll never get pregnant from her dad, and he'll never be born, but then he won't have gone back to stop her, so she will get pregnant, but then he'll stop her. See? Paradox.