All Comments on 'Meeting Danny Coyle'

She ditched her husband to move up. She is a bitch first class.

And their sexual parts rot and fall off.

Just a paid whore.Nothing more nothing less.No Loving Wife here

1*

comments said it all.

Or proof read your work. Then get a decent plot - this was bad. Cardboard characters acting without rhyme or reason. Nothing erotic or interesting in this whole mess. Even for fiction, this was simply terrible. No stars.

I.Q. OF A TURNIP.

One paragraph she's married the next divorced? What was the point of selling herself to get hubby the contract if she was going to leave him and what the fuck woman would enjoy being raped? Rape isn't about sex, you moronic imbecile, it's about power, it's about hurting the recipient, usually a woman.

Then ruining her reputation at work? Fucking her in a grocery store alcove? Where the fuck is there an alcove in a grocery store you retard?

It was like you we're trying to write the worst story possible.

Do us a favor and don't write anything. Ever. Not even a grocery list.

This made no sense...you might try for a more realistic plot next time. 1*

Wow, what a really bad day on lit, this site sucks as do these stories.

you call this writing

loving wives is not for you. 1*

this is not LW

try BDSM

besides that, it was really bad writing.

Eric wasn't her master.

You guys have a very bad reading skills. Don't you know that encouragement is a reading skills? You said the work is bad but you read it to the finish. Do you know what a bad writting is? A bad writting is one that you can never read to finish. As a reader, learn to encourage an author. It's not easy to be an author. I'm one so I know what I'm saying. If any author is among those of you who pasted those comments, then that person is the worst author because a bad author is one who insult a fellow author. Though, critism are welcomed in writting but not insult. All of you that posted a comment just insulted the author not critise.

Please, LEARN TO BE A GOOD READER. Thanks.

Just 1 *...Why? The story was since the start written based in facts that showed like falling from the sky, and then all those strange facts only could lead to an incomprehensible and stupid ending.