All Comments on 'Meeting for Lunch'

by NightGirl359

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Asia69Asia69almost 14 years ago
Very good!

That was very very good, please keep writing I will keep a watch out for more, I do hope you keep this series going!!

mslv4Hermslv4Heralmost 14 years ago
Amazing

You have truly captured the essence of a D/s relationship. From the initial recognition of mutual interests, to the igniting spark, on to the consent, and eventually the caring and joy in pleasing one another. A truly exquisite portrayal.

feliciacosminafeliciacosminaalmost 14 years ago
Perfect!

Mistress, I beg you to continue!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Imagining submitting.

That was seriously hot....

(and nicely written).

waswaerewenn1987waswaerewenn1987almost 14 years ago
Absolutely delicious

I really enjoyed your story because you've found the right way between strength and warmth.

I especially like the aspect of introducing a boy to this theme, I can quite identify myself with him and therefore I hope that you will continue this story.

Greetings from Germany

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