All Comments on 'Meeting Jasmine'

Would love to meet someone in the store like Jasmine and Shellie.

I like the notion of instant attraction, my God if we all reacted to that first glance...

This reads like something you needed to get out of your system, no problem with that, but my overall impression was of it being unpolished. I would have prefered more building of the tension before the explosion overtook them, nice setting, believable, and I know you should leave the reader wanting more, but in my opinion (for what that is worth) that was its weakness.

Awsome story, it reminded me of when my girlfriend and I would go shopping for new clothes. I love your stories. You have a gifted ability to weave enticing and enthrawling stories.

makes me want to go shopping right now! nicely written. Thanks for the excitement...

I'm sitting here shaking my cunt dripping wet. So sexy and I loved the way you took the both charecters to the top .Very well done!!