All Comments on 'Meeting John'

Welcome new author. Nice set up and hot scene. My only nit pic would be the transition into the sex. He said he wanted her to be comfortable with him and he is moving slowly...then right into stripping off her clothes, blindfolding and face fucking her. I got dizzy for a second. Needed a bit more transition. Blindfolding and face fucking don't seem like out of the gate things for strangers. (I'm sure some one here will correct me on that! :D) Look forward to more from you.

Very nice first submission - I liked the flow of the conversation and the details you provided. It it got a little rushed during the intro to sex felt more like wham bam vs. his earlier controlled demeanor . Mixed messages but overall very nice. Just remember your pacing.

Hope to see more from you

I loved it. For your first submission it was great,but I wished it would go deeper into the bdsm realm. I wish I could meet a guy like that out of the blue LOL.... please write more to this story :-) .....

Honestly I did not think my story would be perceived so well, and thanks to all of the help from the comments, and their constructive criticism! I will surely have more to come.