All Comments on 'Meeting Robby'

Great story, really good and hot! Robby is one smokin' lady. And Elaine is a real person, although methinks the lady doth protest too much. Wonderful writing. Quibbles of course follow via "Send Feedback".

Very, VERY good!!!!!!!!

I can't wait to read something "hotter, longer and just damn better" than that.

Thanks Stella. x

Keep up the writting.

Who knew naughty was so nice.

done. Lots of imagination and well written too.

Thanks.

People like you make me want to break my keyboard and give up writing. Damn, Stella. Just that: Da-amn!

Never quite fell for Robby the way Elaine did, but I enjoyed their voices and interplay. I loved it when the characters began to thrash around and the narrative adopted a ragged, frantic urgency to match. Nice line about sweaters too.

I like this very much.

I just have 1 question about the last bit. I don't quite get "if a man starts with me he usually ends with me". I take that line to mean, Elaine is the last woman a man would date, i.e. he stays with her. But that's clearly not the case. Does it mean the man never gets anywhere with her?

I read your other story first not knowing if i was going to finish it... i did. I forgot to put in the comment that i gave it a 5.

I feel i see more of what i like about your writing stlye in this story and it makes me even more curious about more chapters in both stories.

Robby's forwardness made me uncomfortable, but that is about me not her or your writing, i know.

I am on this site for stories about people. I like the seductive romances and the romantic seductions. Saying that, i loved reading what Elaine was thinking and why and her sense of humor while doing so.

I would love to see you write more.

Another 5

Very hot. I liked this a lot.

STELLA, you remind me of Raymond Chandler. Not Chandler at his best, mind you, but there's no bad Raymond Chandler. I cant think of anything to improve your tale, or anything to complain about, nor any fitting insults. 5 STARS. sodamigo.