by littleladyfun
Implausible plot made even worse by poor English and apparently no proofreading. Keep trying - you might get better - might.
Shoreguy
> She had turned 21 a few months back, but her body was that of an adult
No shit, Sherlock? Guess what: 21 *is* an adult… >_<
Oh, and by the way: when you write a rape story, please tell about it in the tags or the category. Some of us aren’t into that…
Pretty ballsy fucking his bosses sleeping daughter with a meeting going on in the next room.plus, she is a pretty heavy sleeper to undergo all of that before she finally did wake up. I agree this sounded very much like it started out as a rape, but turned in to noncompliance and then compliance. What ever, if it turned into something that you didn't like, all that you had to do was stop reading and choose another story. It's not like there is a shortage of stories here.
My only other complaint is it is too short.it looked like you have about 10 chapters, but if each one is a short 1 page, I doubt that I will make it past the 2nd or 3rd chapter.
Shit RAPE story that’s written very poorly. Case in point… “she’s 21 but looks like an adult.” Ahh, what else would she look like?
Shit shit shit, just shit. Look elsewhere for your own sanity’s sake.