by tompayne1809
It would be nice if joanne keeps secretly fucking jim. He ccould shave her pussy and she could also take part in the sex olympics.
After participating in the sex olympics, jim's mom, joanne, sally and laura should get tattoos indicating their liberation.
While I like your writing style, I am not sure how this chapter added to the story line. Either John will have to "see the light" and be less controlling or he will have to be written out of the story because he cannot accept Joanne and Chris' new found independence. Keeping John the way he is and in the story is, to me, a big distraction and definitely a mood killer.
I'm disappointed this should have never been part of this story line. It's just a filler to add to your total number of chapters. If this is all you could think of you mite as well quit the story now. It's called meet the Maddisons not show Chris how to fuck. A one you just lost my interest.
The thoughts that come from an author frequently take unintended directions while writing.
Since it involved the main character in the story I thought it was a good addition.
Keep it up.
At least Jim got some strange pussy, and what was explained of how Joanne looked, it would be impossible to turn down such a beautiful woman.
I was surprised that he only fucked Joanne once, he usually can go for several times.
Well, I hope that he gets back to fucking his mom's sweet pussy soon.
Thanks for the good read.
What an incredible series! I have loved every chapter and can't wait to read more!
Fuck all the haters keep up the good work don't let a few bad comments from keeping you from finishing the story your a grate writer
I am waiting to read the next chapter. Please give us the next chapter
I am really enjoying this series. I really look forward to the sex Olympics. It would be great if Joanne could participate too. Gloria could go to a barber shop to get her hair done in preparation for the competition.
Please continue. I am checking back every day. This is the best series on literotica.
This is the best written and most erotic series I have ever read. Great work.
I am so impatient to read your next wonderful chapter.
I hope you will continue to develop this story...it is stupendous!
Please please give us the next chapter.
I am waiting to read about the sex olympics. I am checking back everyday for a new chapter.
I loved this series so much it was so hot. Please give us the next chapter soon
This was a good change up. Sam got to see another side of "sex life". Although this story was written about 10 years ago, there are still control freaks like the character "John". With his type around, it is no wonder Chris turned out like he did. I am surprised Joanne puts up with it. Although she realizes her limitations, she is doing the best she can for Chris.