All Comments on 'Meeting the Maddisons Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
joannes secret

It would be nice if joanne keeps secretly fucking jim. He ccould shave her pussy and she could also take part in the sex olympics.

After participating in the sex olympics, jim's mom, joanne, sally and laura should get tattoos indicating their liberation.

MJOMJOabout 12 years ago

While I like your writing style, I am not sure how this chapter added to the story line. Either John will have to "see the light" and be less controlling or he will have to be written out of the story because he cannot accept Joanne and Chris' new found independence. Keeping John the way he is and in the story is, to me, a big distraction and definitely a mood killer.

petecopetecoabout 12 years ago
This is just not part of the story

I'm disappointed this should have never been part of this story line. It's just a filler to add to your total number of chapters. If this is all you could think of you mite as well quit the story now. It's called meet the Maddisons not show Chris how to fuck. A one you just lost my interest.

PolyLvrPolyLvrabout 12 years ago
A story is a story.

The thoughts that come from an author frequently take unintended directions while writing.

Since it involved the main character in the story I thought it was a good addition.

Keep it up.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 12 years ago
A little diversion from the family fun isn't a bad thing

At least Jim got some strange pussy, and what was explained of how Joanne looked, it would be impossible to turn down such a beautiful woman.

I was surprised that he only fucked Joanne once, he usually can go for several times.

Well, I hope that he gets back to fucking his mom's sweet pussy soon.

Thanks for the good read.

GRYFANxGRYFANxabout 12 years ago

What an incredible series! I have loved every chapter and can't wait to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
fuck every body

Fuck all the haters keep up the good work don't let a few bad comments from keeping you from finishing the story your a grate writer

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Please continue the series

I am waiting to read the next chapter. Please give us the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Waiting waiting waiting

Please please please give us the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Looking forward to the sex olympics

I am really enjoying this series. I really look forward to the sex Olympics. It would be great if Joanne could participate too. Gloria could go to a barber shop to get her hair done in preparation for the competition.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Please continue. We are waiting

Please continue. I am checking back every day. This is the best series on literotica.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
What happens next

Please continue. I am madly in love with this series.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Great job!

This is the best written and most erotic series I have ever read. Great work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Please give us the next chapter

Please give us the next chapter soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Please give us the next chapter man

I am so impatient to read your next wonderful chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Hot Stuff!

I hope you will continue to develop this story...it is stupendous!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
I beg you on my hands and knees for the next chapter

Please please give us the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Sex olympics

I am waiting to read about the sex olympics. I am checking back everyday for a new chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Please continue. I am checking back everyday

I loved this series so much it was so hot. Please give us the next chapter soon

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
waiting for more

pleaseput more with chris and his family please

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Loving it

Nice subplot

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aabout 1 year ago

This was a good change up. Sam got to see another side of "sex life". Although this story was written about 10 years ago, there are still control freaks like the character "John". With his type around, it is no wonder Chris turned out like he did. I am surprised Joanne puts up with it. Although she realizes her limitations, she is doing the best she can for Chris.

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