by blueeyedkitty
No punches pulled in this vivid account of meeting your neighbours. Crude but exciting. Love to hear more about their next meeting.
Please, more of this. A continuation.....not sure the need for two separate roofs. Maybe start families without regard for ovulating periods.
Was a very fun story.
Gives a whole new meaning to being "neighborly".
*applauds*
Sorry, but your story isn't believable. I could list at least 40 things that made me say "Yeah, right" but I'll save you the embarrassment of that.
Next time get an editor.
When I read this, I knew you couldn't write your way out of a paper bag.
"We had made ourselves pretty comfortable in our new neighborhood and *was* getting to know the community."
Sheesh.