All Comments on 'Meeting Tracy'

by TimidLilKitty

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
High on arousel

I will be looking for more stories by you, I enjoyed the slow seductive build up and then the highly sexed climax. you made the story come alive. Well done.

gypsyredgypsyredover 19 years ago
Okay -- now you know your mind can write a nice ..

story -- how about putting it together with some nice English skills, spelling, punctuation, and grammar?

I note your last commentator couldn't spell arousal.... so I presume that there are readers out there for whom the basics are not important.

Get an editor. Buy a book on grammar and read it! Then put it to use.

Gypsy

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Hot Hot Hot

Damn that was something.

I loved it! Thank you for sharing.

HD

TimidLilKittyTimidLilKittyover 13 years agoAuthor
Terri

Caught you looking!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Yes. It's wrong.

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