by Alex De Kok
This story was so romantic. Not to mention totally fucking hot
A first time romance story that hit the top of my favorite list in a hurry! I loved the slow buildup, and the author did an excellent job of describing the development of their relationship, a detail that's so often omitted.
Alex' stories are always worth reading, and this one more so than most. Builds beautifully, the writing is vivid and descriptive. Bravo!!
Hello from a reader,
I am thoroughly pleased and want to thank you for relating almost a primer for young inexperienced lovers.
I could almost insert myself in the young mans place in this story, when i
first discovered the wonders of mutual loving.
Please keep up the good work.
Franklin 26
this story, though short, still had a good build up, let the relationship build to a natural climax (did I say "climax?"), and prepared the couple for a continuing relationship (and maybe we readers for more peeking into their couplings). Keep up the good work, and thanks!
I know it's been long but it shoul be in the First Time
wasn't a romance at all,
Regarding the previous comment about Category - when 'Meg' was submitted back in 2000, there was NO 'first time' category. Nuff said? I have no plans to move it after all this time.
Alex
This is just a nitpick, but 36B does not equal large breasts *or* a narrow rib cage. 34B-C is average. 34C is the exact same cup volume as 36B, but with a smaller band (the number is the band size, so a bigger number means a broader rib cage). The letter is all about the ratio of the breasts to the band size. So 34C is average; 34D is fairly large, but not unusually so; 34DD is definitely large, but still proportionate depending on hips, etc. As an exceptionally curvy woman, who understands how bra sizes work, this kind of error is sort of a pet-peeve of mine. I think it's better just not to mention the exact bra size at all, but if you're going to do so, do a google search first. However, I assume you're a guy, and a lot of women don't even know their proper bra size, so I don't really blame you.
Get over yourself about the bra sizes, for fucks sakes, its a fictitious story, do you go on and on about the ones that have men with a 14 inch dick? I seriously doubt that.
As for the one saying this isn't a romance, it is, just because it included first time experiences doesn't make it any less of a romance.
I enjoyed this story.
first time.
I loved the build, the tension, and the exploration.