All Comments on 'Megans Revenge'

Looks like Jack will be too busy trying to Keep out of Jail to worry about Megan's Baby and his Employee getting his "whore" wife.

....pov switches have me thinking New Delhi, well educated with ESL and a word processor? How far off can I be???

what will she think of her "revenge"?

For the read.

that is a bit confusing.

title refers to Megan but the beginning voice and background (what there is) are all Tony. He decries the breakup of his marriage due to the long term affair of his wife and her reluctance to give it up. Yet, upon moving and starting a new job, he falls into a long term affair with the wife of his employer.

Then suddenly Megan begins to tell us all about herself and why she wants a divorce so she can marry Tony.

After the one and only page my head is still spinning

...you are a lousy story teller. You have an oh, so desperate need for a GREAT editor who can take your ideas and mold them into readable text.

Until then, 2* for decent plot lines.