by Dog2303
Wow! What a story! I read it and saw the difference between the first chapter and the last. You did get better at your writing. I liked the story and your characters. I know it has been some years since you wrote, but I still enjoyed what came out of your mind. Try not to think about the short sighted assholes that want to criticize everything. Just enjoy writing and know that some people out here enjoy reading it. Thanks for your time and imagination.
What a great story. I really hope you come back and finish it!
A really good story but so much more to come from the various tangents that have been left unwritten
An ideal world of love, sex,passions and fear of the Unknown depths of human frailties
when was this chapter posted? will there be more? I am loving this story and would hate to see it end here.