All Comments on 'Melanie'

I prefer it when girls don't talk to eachother like porn stars. It's just not erotic.

Also, if this is truly a lesbian story then why bring up the husband at all? I don't want to hear about his hard cock. If I did, I wouldn't be reading lesbian stories, would I?

Yuck! This was silly and stupid.

I don't like a lot of build up of characters. This didn't have that. It was just pure, unadulterated fucking. THANK YOU SO MUCH

Loved this...twice I've been chocked and slapped around by another man(I should say "a man," because I've never seen myself as very much of a man), and raped hard in both holes, in my ass first one time, and made his bitch for a couple of months. For most of those two months I was just fucked hard (I was a slave, you see). So, this story resonates with me, the submissive piece of shit that I am.

Touched all the zones it was supposed to i really enjoyed /jerked off to it as my spunk landed on my stomach…..just wishing i was there