All Comments on 'Melanie Entertains'

Lots of lovely detail about her clothes and her erotic talk. The sex is well described as are her cuckold's feelings.

...the voting was from 0 to 5 instead of 1 to 5.

Oh...what a girl is Melanie. Determined to please her husband's prurient sexual interests she agrees to a threesome with two strange men Nick and Jeff while her husband watches.

Far out!

Vary enjoyable read. There is nothing like seeing your wife enjoy herself.

Loved every word and I can't wait to read more of Mel's adventures.

Ignore the lame brained flamer (same bloke I reckon) with his tiny brain and penis.

The writer or writers have picked some sort of infection that has stopped them multiplying. Overall a pathetic attempt at writing a slut wife story. It turned out to be a wimp cuckold husband story. I am glad they stopped writing. Probably too busy getting their brains fucked out.

It just doesn't get any better than this - truly, fucking awesome! Loved it!! Ken

so I rated it 1*.

A hot sexy story between MEL and the two boys this bit deserves5 stars.

But I don't understand a husband wanting his wife to fuck other men let alone two at once, I'm afraid that he has a pea sized brain in situated in his cock end, can't be any where else. Because of this given one star.

DWornock, what an insulting bastard u are and also stupid, I am 37 I feel that I am at my peak, my husband assures me of it anyway, besides I get hit on so often, I must be doing something right. I loved it so sexy, I was wet through, I occasionally wish that my husband would let me enjoy a MMF tryst like that, the author captured it perfectly 5* from me.

Just looked up DWarnocks submissions, averages only 3.58 from 8 stories, not one of which reached 4 stars. This is a man with the temerity to criticise another authors obviously superior work,