All Comments on 'Melanie R'

This story was so intense, and the mood was steamy. Just the way i like an erotic tale. I loved the way it began, all innocent, and then leaving us with some hardcore love making....WANTING MORE!

I gotta say...one of my faves.

When's the next chapter coming out?

WOW! is all i can say, gr8 story such emotion and depth, whoever wrote dis cant wait to make dis story real!