All Comments on 'Melissa Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
i wish

You are so talented I get so Hot just reading them.

GizmorGizmorover 12 years ago
Melissa

Am enjoying this story so much! Hope there is more to cum. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
A Special Gift

You completely understand receiving and giving. The pace at which you unveil both characters' emotions throughout their journey is true to life. I was transported back to my high school days. Especially when the couple knew their moments wouldn't last forever and that they had to return to their separate routines. Now I can't wait to sneak attack my own much older keeper. You have a special gift as a writer.

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