All Comments on 'Melissa Ch. 01'

I sure hope there is more to this story!!! Great job. Thanks.

best story i've read here

Terrific story well written and well worth reading. My only one would be critism "Tittes" is a child's word, please use "Tits" sound so much more adult.

very well writen sounds like what is about to happen to me and my daughter inlaw

Lol I've dealt with prickly pear cactus, they would have been ripped to shreds fucking on the bed of the truck where the cactus debris just was.