All Comments on 'Melissa's Birthday Surprise'

by 1970man

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MorevinilaMorevinila2 months ago

well you did warn it was outrageous – I quite liked the GB part though surprised by the readiness and control Melissa had,since it was her first GB – maybe she had it all planned in her head! What was too much for me was the finale, definitely not for me!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Nearly a 5

This was tracking so well, was going to be a 5 star rating - blow bang, spit roast, rimming, anal, DP, creampies, facials, airtight, the works... Then she asked them to piss on her...

Instant 1 star penalty! Still, 4 stars ain't that bad an effort!

1970man1970manover 9 years agoAuthor

Thanks for your comment, Anonymous. The former was definitely a typo - poor editing by me. The latter is licence - obviously a failure on that one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
a lot of mistakes

On page 2 you talked About having your fingers in her ass but suddenly they were in her pussy. You also cannot taste a smell

You news better grammar

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