All Comments on 'Melissa's Conversion Ch. 01'

So glad to see a new one by you, you're The Best!

Great story! I loved reading a story in which I didn't have to battle the spelling and grammar! Well written in addition to a good story.

Good story ! Can't wait for the party ...will Melissa become a hooker for her new lover ?

great writing.

But I think you rushed it. The set up was fantastic! You had me salivating, the drunk pissed off girl who needs money, the possible pay off if she bends her moral guidelines a bit. I just think you could have kept her "innocent" a little longer so she lost control at the party. The big cock submission at her house just seemed too quick and over the top. Still a great read 4*

Conversion is the right word. When girls convert into sexual creatures they find purpose in their lives. I'm so glad you found yours.

It is good seeing you write again.

I can't wait for your next installment.

Would really really love to see a second part to this story x

It's different than Chap 1. More action. Chap 3 will be out in a few weeks as well.

Thanks for reading, everybody.

this guy got the magic stick 50 cent style homie

WOW! Where can I meet a man like Jim?

This is almost a mind control story. Not much better than a story about a woman who can't help herself.

Goddam my cock is throbbing