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She looks up at me and grins. Her own hand goes to my ass and does the same. Just as she's about to step away I catch her and pull her into a hard kiss.
The darkness begins to give us sounds that seem odds.
We find our clothes and pack back up the camp. The walk back to the collapsed cavern is father than I remember.
I again hear our names being called. I recognize the sound of Simon's voice.
"Simon." I call out to my former boss. As I step into the room. I stop and step back as a shower of pebbles rains down.
"Brandon. Excellent, you're alright. Stay back out this room. We are trying to brace up the roof over here. I'm going to use a saw and air bags to crack this stone out the way but everything is very unstable."
"You sure about this Simon? We're getting a lot of little rocks from the ceiling over here."
"I know same here. Hold up. Hold UP!" the sound stops and I feel the silence grow as the echoes stop. "Brandon how are you for supplies?"
"We got enough for a couple of more days."
"So you're not going to starve to death or dehydrate if I take a bit more time?" there is a long pause. "Okay Brandon It's been about twenty years since I was last in this cave but I mapped it out very well. I want to go check my notes. See if I might be able to find a safer solution. I wish there was some way I could get you supplies."
Thinking about the need for condoms I agree. I look over at Melody and see her grinning as she reads my thoughts.
"We'll be alright for a bit."
"Well hang tight. I'll be back in about an hour or so." I hear Simon saying something to someone else on the other side but I can't make out what.
"I'll keep it as tight as I can." I tell him.
Melody starts to hit my shoulder with her hands I chuckle at the look on her face.
"All right Brandon I'll be back." I listen to the sounds of a group of people move away.
I move us back around the corner and find a place to sit down to wait.
Melody is grinning and looks like she wants to start hitting me again.
"I'll keep it as tight as I can." She says to me in a sarcastic mimicry.
I chuckle and place my pack on the ground. I sit down and hold up a hand to her.
She just looks at it.
"Maybe I'll go find my own cave to sit in."
I reach up and switch off the light.
The darkness slams down on us like a blanket.
"That's not fair." I laugh in the darkness as she sits down next to me. I lean over into my cousin's warmth.
Melody snuggles into my side.
"Can cousins marry in this state?" she asks me after a long time of silence.
"I don't think so." I answer after the question stops startling me.
"Well I guess I'll just have to keep you as a sex toy then." She rests her head on my shoulder.
I sit for a second listen to the water dripping.
"That would not suck." I finally say.
"You better."
I chuckle.
"Because I intend to." she says after a few seconds.
"Good lord I've turned you into a sex fiend." I say laughing.
"More like opened the door to a whole new world. I can't help it if I like to explore." She gives me a poke in the ribs.
"That's kind of what got you down here in the first place."
"Yea."
The silence comes back and I feel my eyes still feeling heavy. I'm close to sleeping when I hear the soft whisper.
"Glad it did."
I turn my head and gently kiss her.
As I drift off to sleep again I know two things. Simon will find us a way out of here in the coming days.
And Melody and I will at some point come back to Lyrics. Because at this moment even more than getting out of here I want to hear this beautiful woman's orgasms echoing back to me again and again as I'm filling her with cum.
- COMMENTS
kaotic25 months agoOmigod... This is so freaking good. This is some really great writing and it's a fantastic love story.
Frankie19527 months agoMore please, have to see where this goes. cousins can marry in most places these days and making babies is usually okay. Love the story.
Falstaff6010 months agoLoved the story. What state are they supposed to be in? Would love to see a fleshed out (see what I did there) story hat continues the their story.
thedayafteralmost 7 years agoAnother great story from MSTarot. Loved it but it really does need another chapter. What happened to them after they were rescued, don't leave us hanging.....
Hexdsword6about 7 years agoAmazing as always! Sorry about the four out of five, sneezed! Anyways love the work and hope for another installment and more new incest love story material!
Turtle1952over 7 years agoloved this story very much. I would love to read more of how long they were in there and how they got out as well as what happened after they got out. Do they live as a couple?
Anonymousover 9 years agoI liked how the backdrop got them together but it was their feeling that pushed them along.
As for the Anon that posted "TOTAL LOAD OF RUBBISH - He gets that worked up and just stops" That is called actually giving a crap about your partner, he had no idea if they would be able to get out inside 48 hours so the morning after pill would be useless.
Try caring about the woman you make love to (yes make love, not fuck you sick bastard), she will appreciate you more.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoVery unique backdrop to the story, with a very nice buildup under the shared circumstances to evolving natural desires & reactions! Beautifully done! Waiting eagerly to see what happens outside the cave.
Oleguyover 10 years agoYou have SUCH a wonderful ability to give me the sense of surroundings, and of course, the sense of the lovers.
Either you have a magnificent imagination or you have led a wonderfully experienced life.
Which ever, my deepest congrats.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoThis story's awesome! I'd love a sequel; I want to know what happens to Brandon and Melody!
bigdaddyg123about 11 years agoMelody is as cute as a teddy bear; her personality, has definitely not been spoiled by her 16 brothers and cousins; and it is one that makes me smile to myself when she speaks, literally and figuratively!
Melody being lost in the cave and found by her cousin proves that fate works in strange ways, and many times, such as this one, turns out considerably better than life would have been for either on of them. It is a fucking shame they never had the right situation to consummate their love--nor their first fuck.
This story has a very nice theme, and the characters are very charming, caring, and have respect and deep deep dedication and devotion to each other. There are many states where they can legally marry. In fact there's very little likelyhood they would be discovered to be related anyway, being they more likely have different last names.
Since the chorus of comments call for further writings about these cousin's incestual love-birds, I'll join right in with them and suggest a sequel of at least one, maybe two more chapters would please many readers of Literotica. Besides, there are not many really good stories about first and second cousin incest love stories, such as this one!!!!!
raconteuseover 11 years agoThis is really very good. Wonderful build from start to finish, and always engaging. No, that should be, 'rivetting'. Dyslexia aside, you're giving voice to a huge talent. Nothing's really going to fix that dyslexia problem, not this late in the day, except a skilled editor. Spell-check isn't much use in cases of dyslexia. Hopefully someone will help you with the editing side of things, so you your talent is recognised and realised. Imagine having a gift like this, paired with dyslexia. A cruel pairing, in some ways. And yet…not such a bad thing, cos you'll never grow arrogant or take your talent for granted. I wish you all the best, and thank you for sharing some great stories.
Anonymousover 11 years agoThat was a really good one. I've read a couple of your stories and this one is my favorite so far. I really liked it. The way you write is both entertaining yet down to earth. Proof reading the story would be good though. That said I cannot wait for the next one. I will be keeping an eye out for it!
Anonymousover 11 years ago...but bloody hard to read!
Spell-check alone would have made a big improvement, but the already mentioned proof-reading could have had you garnering solid 5 star reviews. Do yourself a favor and try working with one of Lit's volunteer editors before your next submission.
