All Comments on 'Melody's Way Ch. 01'

I pre-wrote all of the chapters for this story. I will upload the next chapter every few days so keep an eye out.

I really like this story, and I;m gonna keep reading the rest of the episodes. I just need to tell you about a funny typo you made. You said her shirt was like gauss, and I assume you meant gauze. A gauss is a unit of measurement for magnetic fields. So it got me thinking, is her shirt made of a magnetic field?