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All Comments on 'Melted Music'

by Fru

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rgraham666rgraham666almost 17 years ago
That was a damned interesting piece

Normally I don't enjoy something so chaotic. This piece though, used chaos in just enough of a dose to communicate the narrator's state of mind. Her history and the changes in her came out in dribs and drabs filling the reader in bit by bit.

I thought this an excellent piece of work.

Well done.

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