All Comments on 'Melvin's Magic Love Juice Ch. 05'

by 100 Angry Bananas

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PunjiPunjiover 19 years ago
Developing Nicely

What can I say, I'm s sucker for stories that combine good sex and a plot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Something tells me...

...that the witch has something rather world-shaking(his) to tell him.

Esteban03Esteban03over 19 years ago
I like your work....

....a lot. Very original and intriguing

Esteban03Esteban03over 19 years ago
I like your work....

....a lot. Very original and intriguing

ps Sorry, I forgot to vote in my last comment

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
I love your story!

I saved your author page to my favorites last week so I could see when there is a new chapter. I was so happy to see number 5 today and very glad it continues being excellent!

Huckleman2000Huckleman2000over 19 years ago
Okay, I'm totally hooked

I'd leave you some suggestions, but I really don't want to spoil the story for myself on the off chance that you'd use one!

RuckinLguardRuckinLguardover 2 years ago

Great story. Your tags are gibberish.

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