All Comments on 'Memories of a Love Lost'

What have we here? Such lushly descriptive prose!

"He was divine. His alabaster flesh...sinewy, smooth, hard. Forearms rich with rather pronounced indigo veins. Inner wrists with the thinnest silken skin...his lips were thin yet soft and feathery and would render me senseless." My best wishes to you ElegantRosesBloom, but it's not for me. Still, I gave it 4 stars for effort.

When I saw the title, I thought we were going to see a sympathetic story of one of those Loving Wives, who weren't "burned," but simply learns too late that the grass isn't always greener.

Oh, well.

Style over content.

The story is well written and concise. It's better suited as part of a memoir, or maybe flash fiction. It's not erotica. Honestly, the author would do better to post at other sites where the audience expectations match the story tone, length, and theme.

Yes, this is a fine enough, very short story. It is not a story that fits in this category, probably not on this site.

...I loved this...raw pain...regret....undying love. ...but lost love

5 stars for a well written, elegiac piece. How sad that we have never heard your voice again! So into the ether are sent best wishes for you. Fare thee well!