All Comments on 'Memories of our First Nude Day'

Extremely good work, Tx.

I enjoyed it very much.

Keep up the good work !!!

(My cheeks are flushed) ;

The character interaction was fantastic! Light-hearted, fun, enjoyable read.

Elicited desired response. ;) thanks!

Just the right story length, too.

Thanks for sharing.

What steamy and yummy memories and tender moments! It sounds like you were blissful with your Kitty. She sounds like she was a lovely lady. I imagine you were both lucky to have each other. Thank you for sharing these memories with us. I plan on reading all five of these trips of lovin' down memory lane. Please give us more. Now to figure out how I'm to sleep tonight with bike vibration thoughts running through my body and the outdoor sex wanton. ;)

~Luna

This was an enjoyable story to read, hot and about a man and woman who really love each other, instead of casual coupling. A few things, though: I noticed quite a few errors, either typos or misspellings. In the narrative you tended to string together a lot of short sentences instead of varying between short and long, and this interfered with the flow. And, the most glaring: Early in the story, you refer to National Nude Day as being on JUNE 14.

great story

Ho My God, yes hot and I know the bike,

a Vincent HRD 1000cc,

you can tell by its slow throbbing beat,

that would make anyone so hot and wet.

memories of 'Nero' ridden by Mr Brown. of Stevenage.