All Comments on 'Ménage a Trois'

When the first two paragraphs in your story do not make sense, you're off to a bad start. An editor may help you.

Good story, well told apart from a couple of silly mistakes.

Learn the difference between "lose" and "loose" . They are spelled different, pronounced different and have different meanings. You used the wrong one. But then, so do most people here.

An editor could turn you into a star.

I am probably your biggest fan and I was eagerly waiting for something from you, as it had been a while since you made any contribution However,This was highly disappointing specially after your series The New Car and The French Connection I Suggest you drop it and go back to the previous story lines your best work to date was The New Car. this is a complete waste of your writing talent.

Gave up half way down the first page.

I have read all your stories in xossip and here. If u have more site to write please let me know. I am a big fan of ur writting