All Comments on 'Ménage à Trois'

Why make it like a dream, unless I read it wrong?

A very fine first offering. Hope to see more from this author.

It’s like you forgot to make this reality, which would have made the story more erotic. Not an imagined ménage - lots of people daydream, but a real one. How was the date arranged? You could have inserted those details and the meeting itself would have been much more enticing.

Thanks for the feedback on my first story! It seems I needed to make the transition from the daydream into reality clearer. Good to know for next time.

Also anybody who enjoyed reading - you can find photos and more about me at:

www.miamonday.com

www.twitter.com/mia_monday

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Second story in the works!

Mia x

Hope there's addtional chapters to this story. Keep up that great writing.

Great imagery!

This story IT'S A FANTASY,as ALMOST ALL THE STORIES published in here,so IT CAN'T BE SAID,as someone comments,that "lots of people daydream" of a menage of that kind,because IT'S NOT LIKE THAT AT ALL!Having a fantasy DOESN'T MEAN that you "daydream" about that fantasy happening in real life!

I am so sad that there as been no follow up. It's one of the most well written stories that I have read on any site. Fantasy yes, I have a young mind that creates my own fantasies, however this was so good, so hot, yes I did cum. Thank you

Do you not understand what "lesbian" means? A threesome with a man IS NOT LESBIAN.

I have reported this story.