by benjythang
Really dude? The gay scene is blink-and-you-miss-it. The entire second page is one long ,extended hetero sex scene between a woman and a gay guy (well a "gay" guy since he seems pretty bi actually). And you posted this in gay male?
I liked your story! The pacing was good and the characters seem interesting enough for a one-off story. Will there be subsequent stories?
why is this in the gay section? I didn't want to read about pussy and sex between guys and a chick
Okay, all the sex-with-a-woman stuff was a bit off-putting but it was still a well-written and enjoyable read. Different, yes, but still good. I hope to read more stories from you, you obviously have talent.
For the feedback! Yes, I understand this first portion was very much on the bisexual side. I couldn't find a bisexual section to put this in, so I tagged it as bisexual. I will say that the next part will focus a lot more on gay action. I am hoping to continue writing about these events, and while they will mostly focus on gay couplings, Erica will be involved in some of it. I will look at how to change the location of the story since most people seem to be upset in the location.