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One of the best paranormal romance stories on this site. Please keep posting. I love vampire stories.

where is thorns

I loved it! I want to have sex in a museum now.

What happened to Thorns?

https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/253838

Well... in the progress of being officially published. During NaNoWriMo Smashwords had a special NaNo thing where you can track the progress of NaNoers.

So for this year's NaNoWriMo I reworked Of Thorns and Pearls. I am still reworking it. But I had to take done some of the chapters on Lit. I didnt expect all the chapters to go. I will have to republish a few of the chapters.

HERE IS OF THORNS AND PEARLS https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/253838

I am delighted that you are publishing your stories! Did you find an editor? I noticed that this chapter was notably cleaner. The story line is certainly gripping. I think that their lack of communication about the events in the ruins will come back to haunt them. She obviously read something that he didn't and because of his age and history won't find it easy to accept. He won't trust her easily because he feels superior! Almighty master vampire sir!