All Comments on 'Meredith Ch. 04'

Writer fairly good, although well behind master status like Just Plain Bob (I'm referring to his storytelling skills, not what his stories are about), and farther yet behind the great master Rehnquist. A few spelling problems and a few other language irregularities, but no big deal. I would like to read more of robhasby -- if he continued this series.

The plot was good. There was enough characterization to get an idea of what the narrator was like and the differences between Meredith and Morgan. The interaction with Meredith's dad was a nice addition.

What was mostly missing was feelings -- the narrator, Meredith (especially).

The biggest problem is the story is unfinished.

Nevertheless I gave it 5 stars, partly to encourage a budding writer.

Paul in Oklahoma