All Comments on 'Mermaid Sisters Pt. 01'

But stuff like the foot long cock or the cock going past the cervix is silly

Excellent start to what should be a great story! MORE PLEASE> Soon if possible.

I liked the story and hope there will be more. I do agree the foot long cock and his cock going all the way into her uterus was a bit much. I realize this is fantasy but a bit over the top. Keep it up.

I wish I was one of those mermaids.

Though the foot-long probe stretched credibility (as well as apparently other parts).

Looking forward to where you take this. Keep at it.

Nice story. Although the "we will send you back" line can be a bit if a downer in the future. I would like to see Tom settle down with the mermaid sisters as their long-term husband. First round sex, as you have already said, won't guarantee to knock all three of them up. However three rounds into the routine they can have actual love blossomed among them and Tom may want to stay and tend to the baby mermaids himself.

Amazing story. But dont give the guy a name. just speak in the first person. it makes it easier to imagine that you are the guy if you dont give a name

looking forward to more!

please upload a second chapter

I'm exited for more

Wow...just wow

...you hadn't decided to give him a ridiculous 12 inch penis. Really? Have you ever met anyone with a dick that big? Statistically they are one in a million. I know it's fantasy, being mermaids and all, but try to maintain some sense of believability.

I SOOOOOO wish I was him

I wish I could experience this in real life

Contact me at phoenix23ninja@gmail.com if something like this is possible (life-like VR AKA Virtual Reality is fine)

I think the redhead was Emily first and the brunette was Elaina, but then Elaina became the redhead??

This may be several years too late, but I will leave a comment anyway. Thank you for presenting mermaids as legends and fantasy have long-held them: beautiful, female mammals with bare breasts and pussy (no “seashell bikini” crap). This story has begun with nice erotica and interest. But I agree with other commentators that a 12 inch cock, especially the penetrating cervix and uterus, are distracting and ridiculous. I also felt the description of carrying other sea creatures’ eggs and being inseminated, being breeders of the sea, was odd and distracting, unless this foreshadow some future plot point. I look forward to reading on.