All Comments on 'Mermaid's Kiss Pt. 02'
by cornishrebel
- 3 Comments
Anonymousover 13 years agoLOL err as a Cornish boy the heartbroken girls on holiday were interesting. As a true gent I usually ended up with wet shoulders. But there is something about sitting on a beach at 2am watching the stars reflect in the dark ocean, listening to the shifting sand in the surf. Holding the heartbroken close to comfort and warm as the heat from the day melts away. When the smile is there in the morning and the trust is reborn in the eyes, the sun catches the low clouds turning the sky all colours. that's what stays in mind of the area you're writing about.. just stay out of the clubs.. keeb up the story please
Anonymousover 13 years agoPlease continue . Setting and characters are exellent. The exit of Pete and the introduction of Sammi give great opportunities
