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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Failed story

You know how many horrible things he could do to her to get her to move? The Dog would be the first thing that died. Things would get worse for her house from there. This was poorly thought out drivel.

GRUMPY1962GRUMPY1962about 5 years ago
oh boy

the story has it GOOD points and then the ending is so off to left field ..wow!

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