All Comments on 'Mesmerized'

Nice, well written story; and with a good basis in reality - the proper place for us white girls is between the legs of a superior Black Woman!

proper place for white men is also between the legs of a black woman

to see Miss Jones take on more challenging prey. Britney was fine, but she appears friendless, without a beau, and poor (why steal a poor girl's money).

You had a great progression going. Little steps, subtle influence along the path to submission and ownership. Then it just leapt to complete unadulterated control. Makes it look like you just got lazy and jumped to the end.

That journey is the best part.

Good story overall. I wish we had seen more of what happened in the trance. But my main critique was the waxing scene. It was very unrealistic. The Anus is one of the least painful parts of waxing, talk to anyone whose had a Brazilian. Also you can not really do anything for 1-2 days after. The area is red and splotchy and can become infected if you don’t give yourself time to recover

Me Jones could use Brittney as a fucktoy for black men to humiliate and impregnate. Plus have ambitious black women use her as a spanking toy to punish her for inner racism to all blacks.

A shame you never continued this story. I would have really liked to have seen what was in store for her.

Such a lovely story, even if it has some filler for my taste the way the submission manifests is top tier