All Comments on 'Met a Hot Couple at a Bar'

So many errors I stopped reading. Suggest you either proof read or use the services of an editor.

I don't worry about puctuation, but the miss spelled words in this story bothered me. Not so much miss spelled, but incomplete words dropping the first letter, or the last letter. All are pretty much from the writter being excited & missing the key.

At least post this mess correctly. Gay male or group sex would have been much better areas although I think it would have gotten bombed in either place. And you REALLY need to get an editor. As is, the story is just about unreadable.

Really hot _wish it was me eating her while you fucked her

Put your pathc gay shit where it belongs, or at least stick it up your nasty ass.

On the list of tags 'bisexual male' is there twice.

The editors note in the first paragraph states that the story has some bisaxual male content.

Good gay fantasy, good way to pick up A.I.Ds.

It was quick and fun. The sex was really hot

This is an unabashed cuck and whorewife story.