All Comments on 'MetaMorph Ch. 04'

... So good.

Your writing is sophisticated and nuanced. You seem less interested in black and white responses and more in what goes on in your characters heads and hearts. Likely to get a violent backlash from the BTB crowd but for me your writing is a favorite. I don't always agree with where you go, but boy you put a lot of thought into going there and it has been an engrossing ride in both your stories.

Keep up the great work!

Story is developing well except for June. Compartmentalization is a good angle, but you can't use it as selectively as you seem to want to do. If it is truly happening, then she wouldn't feel guilt at the agonizing level you indicate. If she was truly feeling as guilty as she claimed then it wasn't really going on. Can't have it both ways. The end is becoming clearer. I see you increasing those steroid injections. By the way, how tall is he? At 260 lbs I wore size 44 pants, but he does it at 300lbs??. Like him I dedicated myself to eating better and exercising and dropped 60 lbs. I now have a 35 in waist. Although I did it for medical reasons (diabetes around the corner) you can see why this character resonates with me and why I await his castration with such trepidation.

By the way, avoid using trendy words like "literally" until you learn how to do so correctly. This word seems to have become de rigor lately and is almost always used incorrectly. I think people use it because they think it makes them appear intelligent and well educated when in fact it does the opposite, at least to those of us who truly are. If she was "literally walking on air", she would have to be physically hovering above ground. I'm sure you intended to use the figurative meaning. Then again, it could explain why you think muscle is much heavier than fat.

Sorry but the ending with the hooker spelled the end for them. In theory, adding new tools etc is fine. But at the end of the day he's just as much a cheater as his wife.

Story is well written and I was enjoying it immensely but now there isn't anyone left to root for.

There's your tale. Right there. It allowed for the wife to cheat. It gave her a separate life from her husband. No matter what she said in her letter, if not caught she wouldn't have thought about the cheating at all and would continue to betray her husband when the situation came about. Now about Dan and the hooker. What the fuck was that? She told him that women can love their husband and have sex with others without any guilt because it was only sex, not love. Sounds like it came word for word from the cheaters handbook.

If Dan returns to the wife he will return as a slimmer man in shape and a cheater himself. If June loves the new Dan it proves she was never satisfied with him. Also he returns as a successful writer with a hefty paycheck to start his writing career.

So how are you going to end this? Whatever you do please just get it over with.

And kill off Greg will you?

No matter how you end this story, it's been an enjoyable read. You have strung us along with a good story and lots of twist and turns.

June, I can't get a clear read on her. Greg, a villain with a soul?

Now if only the comic book store owner's daughter falls in love with Greg? No wait that is too far out.....

But not as good as the other chapters. Three things stood out as odd:

1. In the beginning Dan was built up as quite a good lover. He had read books, and seemed to rock his wife's world. Why this extended chapter on getting him lessons? It just seems out of place. Their problem was in regard to his getting fatter and being limited in positions.

2. This chapter seems to presuppose that the two are getting back together. He is taking these lessons so that he will be able to keep her satisfied in the sack. I am not sure you have completely built the case for reconciliation. You still have work to do.

3. The whole speech about women being wired differently comes off as a justification for her actions. Makes me wonder if you have a particular agenda. Greg used that argument on Dan. His wife used that argument on him. Now, the pro is using the same argument. Only this time it comes from the "wise teacher." And it actually seems to get him thinking. He set out not to sleep with her, but after hearing her argument, he does her. That means he bought it. Are you trying to get the reader to buy this argument as well? Is it ok for woman to sleep around because they are wired differently? They can separate sex from love, while men can't. This sounds like cuckold reasoning. It is exactly what wives tell their hubby's when they are trying to get them to be cuckolded. It is exactly what those hairbraned "sexperts" who push cuckolding say in their books and on their websites. Evolution has set this up as the way things are. To be honest with you, the reason I am not buying reconciliation yet is because I feel the wife is coming across as inauthentic. She still seems to be clinging to the idea that what she did in NO wasn't going to affect him. It didn't mean she didn't love him. With reasoning like that, she will cheat again. You have tried to have her back off those statements, but her tone still seems to carry that attitude. Again, depends on what your agenda is. Please don't have this guy turn into a cuckold.

This chapter makes Dan a cheater as well. I agree with BBL. I do not agree with his comment regarding her only loving him upon his return as a lighter version of himself. She is professing undying love now, not realizing what he is doing. If anything, when she sees what he did (obviously motivated by her actions), she ought to feel even more like shit. What a contrast: she loves him so much she goes out and fucks another guy (if you want to call it love); he loves her so much he endures terrible hardship to transform himself. Wow! A match made in Heaven?

wow a southern whore in LA that is a professional counselor and sex therapist. The prepared piece of paper with links to various books sounds as if this is a regular gig for her and it was preprinted information. And I agree his moral stand and beliefs were destroyed by the act of adultry with the whore. Now he has nothing to blame his wife with, revenge fucks do nothing to reestablish a destroyed relationship, its an act of one up manship.

Both are idiots and cheaters they deserve each other

With the other commenters that said adding the hooker killed the buildup of the story and dropped Dan to the level of his cheating wife. You had us all with overweight husband with the cheating wife who gets a chance to make a real change in his life both mentally and physically. When you added the sex education, you just killed the hero status that Dan had up to that point. We may not know where your going with the next chapter, but in my opinion you've painted an outline of how the story will end.

...and again you have - in my eyes - improved since your previous chapter yesterday.

I agree with most of what has been written here earlier; Perhapst it would be wise to explain Greg´s own metamorphosis; his constant contact with Dan might just have made im reflect on his own life. Maybe you intend two or three alternative endings yourself (would fit, wouldn´t it?)

Whatever you are going to do with this story: please d o n ´t turn Dan into some swinger - and please don´t extend it more than needed. You´ve got a great story here; don´t put "too much salt into the soup". 5*

Liked the story (excellent style, btw), but it looks like this is becoming a case to justify her cheating; if it weren't for that; he wouldn't have gotten his pride back, he wouldn't have gotten in shape, he wouldn't have become a success, he wouldn't have become a better lover, etc. I see an unjustified reconciliation on the horizon.

I'm not finding the episode with the hooker unexpected or, at this point, out of character since it was one of Greg's promises at the outset of the training. Perhaps it is out of character under normal circumstances but Dan is not living under normal circumstances. The puritanicals are pronouncing him a cheater now as well and the 2 wrongs don't make a right crowd will continue to ballyhoo their point but in the reality of it all Dan couldn't help but go. It was stated quite heavily (no pun intended) that he was not interested which shows his initial and usual character. In the end, however, he does go in reaction to the anger he still carries. Will he feel like he has cheated too? Probably, but he will use this feeling of regret and possible angst to dissuade his anger and resentment against Sandra. Is it odd that a call girl is a sex therapist? Yes. It isn't out of the range of possibility that someone in her position has learned a great deal of the psyche behind men and sex. Perhaps there are some who are so in tune with themselves, their chosen vocation and their insights that they become more clinical about it. Even if it is a way to rationalize selling their body for money it could still be true.

I am not in agreement with many of the comments left here so far. I am wondering what Sandra will think of the new Dan when he shows up. Even though he may begin to resemble Greg in looks I am not sure she would truly appreciate or like what he has done. Even so, if she did, I don't think it tries to rationalize that she was right in first place to cheat with Greg. It will be interesting to see how the final chapter comes (anyone who has been following the comments should know this is a 5 chapter story) when Dan reveals his new self to Sandra. Even though it is already written and submitted I certainly hope that the asshole Greg gets some real payback, SERIOUS payback. I know beating his ass half to death in the ring would be the "hallmark" version of this story I would like it better than Greg getting one more up on Dan.

Anxiously waiting on the next chapter

Screwing the whore destroyed my sympathy for Dan. He is just as guilty as the wife. SHE should leave HIM.

The hooker was an unnecessary thing. Now how is this ever going to be a hallmark showcase production?? Three different endings, how trite although a unique way to show the readers what could have happened.

True the marriage vows are voided by her four time fucking Greg, but a pro???

Again, you are changing the male character to get to the ending.

I still have trouble with the scumbag Greg doing all this for poor little or rather lardass Dan. There gas to be an ulterior motive.

I am not sure how remorseful June is either. Once, and the level if remorse okay. Twice maybe but four fucking times and giving her ass to Dan so Greg could have it?? Not too sure.

We shall see

Dan getting his big break in the writing business felt like something that could happen. The email from June was psycobabble bullshit of the highest order as if it was how she really felt there would be no guilt for her due to her compartmentalization.

She claims she was wracked with guilt from the moment it started, yet continued with her fuck fest with Greg, gave her ass to Dan only so she could later give it to Greg and treated Dan like shit when she went home but still was in bed with Greg only a few hours after getting back to the hotel. The last time with Greg proves her to be a liar about her only cheating under a very odd set of circumstance as were supposed to believe she hit all these circumstances so very soon after returning to work. He email also failed to give any reason for her stopping all communications with her husband.

The bit with Dan and Sandra added nothing to the story. The only problem with Dan and June's sex life was his weight and seeing as he lost the weight why does he suddenly need sex lesson's? Her explanation about how women view sex and love was also complete bullshit and just crap taken from the cheaters handbook.

I also disliked the crap from Greg about Dan having to be the best of the best to be able to hold onto June as she is the one who fucked around and that put the marriage in the shitter so it's Dan's call on if he will take her back or not.

As for the comments about Dan being no better than June due to him having sex with Sandra, all I can say is can I get some of what you guys are smoking?

June broke her marriage vows, she cheated multiple times, she treated her husband like shit and then disrespected him by giving him her ass only because her fuck buddy told her to. Once the marriage vows were broken all bets were off so why the hell should Dan be held to a broken agreement?

But what happened to the PI surveillance? He got ONE report 2 months ago. She's been emailing him, but you'd think that Dan would be at the "need to verify" stage here. Yes, we know that this is a reconciliation story, so we WANT to believe that June is celibate since the break-up. However, I'm sure that in at least one of the 3 endings, June has continued on with the affair, and Greg has been masterminding some crippling emotional trauma that will leave Dan broken and primed to become a "willing" cuck. Building him up almost all the way, only to break him back down to accept that he'll never get there, or some moronic shit like that. I say this because of how jaded I am, trolling through the amount of cucky crap that prevails in this LW category on this site. I ACTUALLY think that your story WILL be one of triumph and reunion, and that true love WILL prevail. However, you have created some really unlikely scenarios with this tale already. The most realistic characterization is of the comic book guy being a basement dwelling pothead: SPOT ON! Another thing I had a problem with is likelihood of the Hallmark channel being interested in THIS story, and unfinished to boot? I think that Dan should have had other work he could use to get Caddy interested, and been forced to revise and tweak it to get it right, so the parallel of training in the gym and training his writing muse at the same time. Oh well, I have really liked having a new chapter everyday, and am eager to keep going. Can't wait to see which of the three endings you pick for Dan. Will he and June get back, better then ever, and happily ever after? Will they split, because Dan did improve himself and no longer needs to be tied to her after her betrayal? Or will there be the tragic death that comes just before the matter can be resolved, and we'll never know? Can't wait to see, and thanks!

Tell me the hooker has a southern accent, remind me from time to time of her drawl, even throw in some unique southern phrases, but please, for the love of God, cut out the 'Ahs'.

the commenters who said too much psychobabble and unnecessary talk. What is different about MetaMorph is that unlike nearly every other Literotica tale in the LW section, this tale, in addition to the strong story content, contains what I almost never see in Literotica: some wisdom, some intelligent thinking about what motivates people, and some clear insight into men and women's psychological makeup. Thank you, Jeezaz. I look forward to your next chapter, am looking forward to it with great expectations.

This really is VERY good.... Your writing has style and is sophisticated in a way that makes me think you have perhaps written quite a lot more then your submissions to this site would indicate.

All men are not same and all women are not same. In our genders we are different personalities. There is an old way of saying, evrybody starts his/her POV from his/her own mind.....................like this escort girl.........

For example Not the all husbands are dreaming their wife is fucked by strangers......

feeling there is going to be a dodgy twist at the end that will bugger it up.

Next chapter please

your lack of editing is apparent and for this reader distracting. I read Out of Love as I had indicated and find MetaMorph a topper. Out of love was predictable for me and I didn't even try. But, it too was enjoyable. Thanks for your efforts!

I agree with the comment about the "ah's" - very annoying aspect.

good pacing...nice use of dialogue and character development to move the ideas along....

So now the protagonist is also changing his career. For the better .And his finances ,for the better.

So he goes back to his wife a better man in everyway. Oops , he slept with a prostitute . Wow !!

What a story can having a child be their only salvation ??

Like Col. Klink said, ” Very Interesting ”.

Liking the story .Again 4* .

A Merry Man

"Yes. Ah've no doubt it doesn't. See, honey, women are different from men. They can separate out sex and love way more than a man can. A woman can love sex with one man, and completely give her heart to another one. We are capable of that. Men, well, lovely creatures that they are, don't seem to be able to. Sex and love and intimacy are all tied together. Ah've watched women get banged senseless, loving it, while holding their husbands hands and looking into his eyes with love and gratitude, and they see nothing wrong with it.

Are these ideas the Author's massage? Did the author want to write originaly the "See, honey, prostitutes are different........", but he has not editor to show this mistake. My fear is that these sentences are not mistake.............BTW Neither all women are same nor the all women are same. This attitude may be good for a prostitute, swinger wives, for hot wives. Would all women like to fuck a stranger together with her hands in her husband's hand?

I am afraid of such story type evolution, like Murphy and MM produced, who wrote more decent stories, when they began his stories published, but now.........1-1 decent story with mixing other type stories from them.

I wait for the last chapter for voting............

Men have been separating sex from marriage since the beginning of time. Women have started to catch up, but to propose the opposite is just plain foolish. The entire story has been as predictable as the rising sun since the first paragraph. Reconciliation after self-improvement. That simple. Dan should kick the shit out of Greg, then take his new-found money and leave June in the dust. Not going to happen.

main mistake in this chapter. you either know what you are talking about or you don't.

if somebody has an IQ under 40 and cheats, well we know she is not understanding to many things.

if somebody cheat because she is mentally ill, well then she would not work, not be able to sign any kind of contract and live in a home for mentally ill and not be married.

if somebody cheats because of a crime like given some drugs without her knowing, it a crime and not cheating, it would be rape.

everybody else is mentally healthy. that means just a couple of beers or whatever is no excuse.

in this chapter there was so much psycobabble it's hard to digest. starting with the wifes email (althoug she does not believe in it to much) over the hooker who maybe knows something about fucking but not much about psychology, what kind of bullshit.

that means she did cheat and knew what she did. she has a different attitude to life !!!!!! that's it. I never bothered with any excuses. she want's it different then she can go and find different. end of case.

now Dan fucking the hooker, so be it. no problem with him starting to have succes as a writer also. but do you really think if you did something really shameful that you should go and tell the whole world that story ?

it makes it impossible for two ( in the end) well known public people to be togehter. Dan's betrayal is a lot worse than his wife's. marriage definitly doomed and not because of her. what is he going to tell the world the next time ? that he saw you fucking a pumpkin on halloween eventhough you are married and live next door ?

the story is nice to follow but as my dad said, Cobbler, stick to your trade. the hooker's philosophy of life to sell as given was way over the top.

thanks for writing

not sure what the wimp or cuckhold and hookers comments are all about. give the poor guy a chance to rebuild his life...maybe be a better man and lover in the end.

When do we find out that hubby was set up and wife had been continuing the relationship with asshole? Did they just make him a cheater too so the hard body cheating can continue?

We never get to meet the wife except through others. Might all be acting to find a way to continue the affair.

Sleeping with Sandra made him just a guilty as wifey. I really liked the story and could empathise with Dan but activly cheating went to far for me. 2 wrongs do not make a right.

Using Sandra to provide soley a visual and "semi-interactive" guide would have worked just as well.

You know Wife with 'produce' children at the end of this. I can totally see and understand them reconciling after this.

The part about Submissive women. - I once read that all women like to know that men can take charge. Its about an alpha male. Stand up to the woman and she'll hope you can/will stand up for her against other men.

its not so much a desire to submit but a recognition of normal male physical superiority. Being physically dominated.

I liked the letter.

People keep saying Dan is as bad as June. No. They HAD a committed relationship, but she ended it by cheating. He is now a free agent. He can fuck whoever he wants. If they get back together and commit anew, then he must stay true. Right now he owes her no fidelity after she broke their vows.

So today I was photographing two drop dead gorgeous porn stars in LA who were parading around naked for 8 hours and all I kept thinking of was your damn story and the latest installment of Dan and June's saga.

I'd like Dan to take her back but not easily.

This chapter moved the ball down the field nicely. I have no great problem with the hooker / therapist component, although I think (and earlier commented) it was gratuitous and unnecessary! I AM glad there was no BUBBLY wine consumed in this portion. That was painful!

I believe there is no longer any story time-space left for a step I consider critical. Hubby should have tasked his nemesis to try to BE his nemesis again. With six weeks or so left, have The Bull spend some time and effort trying to re-insert (hehehe) himself into Sweetie's life and pants again, just to see if she could stay the 'faithful' course (or would succumb to a seduction.) At THIS juncture, it is too late for The Bull to mount a serious assault on Sweetie's carnal gates!

So he being all that moral goes to a hooker, is he being set up by that personal trainer for a fall.? He sees his wife trying to make her mistake up to him but now he strays to what end. To stick his dick into some whore. I don't like the way this is heading. Well see.

does anyone with a brain REALLY believe this goddamn bullshit?

...... See, honey, women are different from men. They can separate out sex and love way more than a man can. A woman can love sex with one man, and completely give her heart to another one. We are capable of that. Men, well, lovely creatures that they are, don't seem to be able to. Sex and love and intimacy are all tied together. Ah've watched women get banged senseless, loving it, while holding their husbands hands and looking into his eyes with love and gratitude, and they see nothing wrong with it. Men could never do that. We are just different creatures honey. We are wired differently."...

The post from the photographer shooting 2 hot porn goddesses.

Oh boy I wish I had that kind of job !

I do hope Dan turns out to be the alpha male I want him to be.

Greg is just a swallow character who lives for his ego and image. He has no substance to his sole. Strangely enough some women I have known just want the material trappings of life !

Hope Dan succeeds.

Once again a let down....ahh the doctor gave me a note so i can cheat...a story that could have been great is turning into ash.wimpy and what appears to be a deep seated hate of fat men, because any chance for the character to grow is crushed.

For two assholes who claim to hate these possible recon stories, you two spend a hell of lot time reading them?

Kinda reminds me of all the homophobes who turn out to be so deep into the closet homosexuals, we call them spelunkers.

As bitter little primatesm you two as team HairyMonkey. are piss poor caricatures of men. Lacking in maturity, it frightens you two that adults can learn from their mistakes enough to better themselves.

Making restitution to those they wronged.

Earning the forgiveness to rebuild an old relationship.

Or, earn the Grace to give them the courage to build new relationships.

I hope for you that neither of you ever need charity or mercy for yourselves. Because the hateful venom you spew displays that you have never earned such.

to see some of the comments here on the morals of Dan using Sandra. She basically is nothing else than a superior trainer although in a different department. Dan needs to get his head around that and use it to his advantage to both satisfy his needs and the needs of his wife.

May they both live happily ever after.

"...since I still don't really know why I did what I did."

And that folks, is the crux of the matter. A cheating cunt that doesn't know why she spread her legs and broke her wedding vows and would have continued as long as she could, until Dan found her out.

If we boil it down, she is just a slutty cunt that had no problems cheating on her supposed mate for life, simply because she was in another town away from her husband and could live two lives.

A cheater. Just a skanky cheater.

I'm also enjoying Greg's improbable but imaginative dual roles as body makeover mentor and marital villain. What will happen the date of their fisticuffs showdown ! jezzaz excelled in setting that subplot up to keep tension going beyond main reconciliation question.

Get rid of the lowlife Brit ! But I digress. Story is well written and easy to read.

Worth 4* I gave. Good luck for the future.

I think I remember where this is going, and it seems weaker that I remember. The story boils down to this: she cheats on him because he is fat, he goes off to lose weight, he gets sex lessons, then he goes back to her. Wow, she really paid a heavy price for cheating. While I think there is more to this storyline, it is not much more.

is that men do a better job of separating love from sex. Not saying it's a good thing.

Still a favorite, but why would she go to the guy she cheated with to help her? I just don't get that connection. He was a physical trainer, not a private eye or independently wealthy guy. He was a body and a pretty face. Why reach out to him for help?

The long email explanation from June is just BS, except for insight into her thoughts about Dan. Why did she cheat? Because she didn't love and respect Dan enough to stay faithful. She was too busy thinking about herself instead. That's it, end of story.

So instead Dan is completely changing and Greg has brought up the fact that it is happening so that Dan doesn't lose her again. This implies that June will cheat again unless Greg becomes something different ( referring to getting more sex education) reaffirming that June actually doesn't love Dan for who he is.

I so hope this isn't an RAAC story. June is soooooooooo not worth it.

A bit of physical pain can hardly be considered fitting revenge, Greg ruined his marriage, so why not ruin his business and reputation in return?

That whole garbage about Greg being shallow and no threat is exactly that. Garbage. He was enough of a threat to make Dan a cucold after all.

If Dan can't see the point of that, why is he bothering to set up a fight and train for it?

It's inconsistent characterisation.

This is the silliest thing I've read in a long while, and outright wrong. It's usually the other way around:

"women are different from men. They can separate out sex and love way more than a man can"

But use gobbled goop again to justify her action and his reaction. He was 'already a better lover' than the trainer. These scenes just paint him with the same brush. A cheater.

First you say that women are wired differently then men. I agree, but then you start with the sex and love stuff being different to a man then a women. Well i can possibly agree with that, but the issue i have is infidelity, it pretty much means the same to both. That is the issue here, and watering it down to make it easier for you to swallow is crap.

Loser idiot author

Ahhhh the solution to every marriage problem go see a skank hooker who’d have thought lol

The Answer to every Marriage . Cheat on Your Wife with a Hooker .. The Hooker was also set up for him by his worst enemy .. I wonder if their were Cameras in the room .

Why would you write a story about such a useless piece of humanity? This is just another PITIFUL RAAC story.

I didn't believe it, but apparently the following applies to this story: Dumber is always possible! Why you need so many chapters for a cheap cuckold story is a mystery to me!

I like the idea of making the whore wife Green with envy!!!

The Southern accent was a tough read. Might want to sharpen your pencil to make it on the level with your regular outstanding prose.

Ah, Ah, Ah... WTF? Please, I can imagine her accent after you write "southern drawl". No need to simply make a good read shitty with bad grammar.

Good story, too much criticism. I wonder how you guys do it, you authors I mean? Do research how men and

women think or act? Do you write from experience? After reading a lot of these stories I'm trying to understand women, I'm almost 80 and still learning but not much contact with women any more except my daughters and a neighbor or two. I tend to agree with the statements in so many of these stories that women are wired differently and that's always been difficult to understand. Guess I should read the "Women are from Venus, men are from Mars". Anyway I enjoy most of these stories and this one is my second reading because it pooped in my head the other day and I couldn't remember how it ended, except for our hero to beat the shit out of Greg. Keep writiing-please.

At least Dan now knows Greg was no better than him in bed. That must be enough to satisfy his curiosity and take his cheating wife back. Since he has gotten a well-shaped body and gained the much needed validation from a whore he will have no problem moving on. Yay!

Oh yeah...that often fixes a broken marriage. Some time with a paid whore. That fixes things.

Repulsive.

REALLY GOOD.

One thing though, and I totally understand his pain-been there-but if he wants to make a go of it he needs to give up his need to punish her. In the short,as well as long run, it will degrade the relationship to termination; all at an unconscious level.

ALSO, HE needs counseling. He too has crippling issue guite apart from anything to do with June.

Really not sure about the twist in education, think that detracts. BUT hell its your story so I'll go with it.

Well written, of course. No one would have expected less from this author. It's a take on relationships I just can't buy. She's not seeking validation, or control. She's just a slut who wants some strange and needs an excuse. Even admitting she was prowling she made it his fault. Okay, normal. Buthe boughtit...not so normal.

This guy is supposed to not be stupid, right? And he put himself in the position of being blackmailed by his wife ex lover? um ok

still reading. I am having a hard time enjoying it. I see some future problems. Do you rectify them?

“ See, honey, women are different from men. They can separate out sex and love way more than a man can. A woman can love sex with one man, and completely give her heart to another one. We are capable of that”. Biology and pair bonding say different. The expert is spitting false accretions.

Im VERY glad he's having sex with another woman too. It's not about 'getting equal' but I don't think two people can come back from one's cheating without the other having a release as well. Maybe the better word is balance?

Great series Im super invested. 5 starz homie

Interesting how the hooker with a heart of gold basically inverts the male and female dynamic regarding sex and love. Lol.

Still a good story. The use of the taped conversation with Megan, the long email, and his time with Sandra are creative and useful plot devices that provide some insights the MC would never get in a straight up conversation.

Personally after his short confrontation with his wife, and her hurtful (yet honest) outburst, I would have said, get lean and fit and then pummel Greg, but after the four months, show up, present yourself to your wife, maybe spend a weekend in bed and then cut her loose.

But now angling towards reconciliation with this chapter. Still need a lot of work. Will be Interesting to see if author and pull off the reconciliation.

Worst story I’ve ever read. Now we have TWO cheating assholes. Why should I give a rat’s ass about either cheater. Off to find a decent author.

I found this chapter to be rather well done. The escorts analysis if, in my mind rather accurate. I have a friend who used to a high-end escort, and she pointed out to me that the area men need help most is tuning into and accurately reading the woman's physical responses to what he is doing. Ge THAT, coupled with good techniques, is a serious force multiplier that will put you miles ahead of the other guys. She'll definitely want to have you back for more because she is satisfied on so many more levels.