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PaperdartPaperdartover 8 years ago
Well done

Hey, that was a good inventive story even if you did not really want to write it.

GrandPaMGrandPaMover 7 years ago
Your story touches heavly on the themes from Forbidden Planet

...and I just read another of your stories today on that very same theme.

You, sir, have a delightfully warped mind. 4* for this one as I think it could have been a bit better, but you were fighting it yourself.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
definitely...

an original (to me) treatment.

Thanks for your time and talent!

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I was born in the Midwest, but have traveled extensively throughout the United States and Canada. Currently I am full-time camping throughout the United States and Canada and spending my time writing for both fun and profit. Books with longer stories such as the kind posted on...