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by dirtymaria
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L O Reinsover 8 years agoNice Writing
Good first story. Short (ha) but sweet. I hope you continue. Also hope you'll proof better before submitting. Thanks for a good read.
mel_pomeneover 8 years agoA great story ...
... especially for a first outing. Well done and welcome, dirtymaria, and please bring us more! Five stars from me, but one word of advice -- don't submit your story while the ink is still wet!
Anonymousover 8 years agoWhen she got back?
He was gone. Like her imaginary control. Did you bother to proof read this nonsense?
Really bad. Awful.
yowserabout 8 years agoHa!
That will teach you to have a small penis! Lovely story, quick paced, imaginative, descriptive. Glisten on...
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