All Comments on 'Mexicans in My Bed'

by cindylynn34

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smartmalksmartmalkover 7 years ago
nice creation!

Nice story, nice title ... Thanks!

regarding the title...

It got in my mind - the great song of Alice Cooper - 'Skeletons In The Closet'

it would be changed to:

Skeletons in my closet

Mexicans in my bed

Skeletons I can only see

Mexicans I can't lose.

:D

1954hall1954hallover 7 years ago
Nice start

Curious to see where you take this. Right now it's open ended.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Thank you

Trucking storied are always very hot

Mixedmind16Mixedmind16over 7 years ago

Please don't let drugs or gang sex become part of this story. I love it so far 4

feedingtheratsfeedingtheratsalmost 7 years ago

you have my interest. lots could happen for this trio.

farahGibsonfarahGibsonalmost 7 years ago

I really liked this story..

xpressherxpressheralmost 7 years ago

Sneaky alberto, using his dog for luring girls.

eatyourverbschildeatyourverbschildalmost 7 years ago

same birthday cindylynn, just not same year. going to read the next chapter.good stuff.

spermscentedpiespermscentedpiealmost 7 years ago

wow cindylynn, I am loving this scenario too. so far each of your tales are right up my alley.

pasadenakidpasadenakidalmost 7 years ago

I have no idea what an 18wheeler is like on the inside but if I had crawled up in one at a truck stop when I was young I would have been very excited and wet knowing each truck around me contained older men and beds close by. the feeling of doom may have been heavy on my heart as well. maybe xpressher is right, the dog is the pacifier until the doors are locked up.

feedingtheratsfeedingtheratsalmost 7 years ago

I agree, Beth getting into that big truck must have been very intimidating. Would have been hot hearing her perspective or reluctance.

DuurwoodDuurwoodover 6 years ago

hope she sneaks back to the truck stop for more trucker sex, maybe bringing a friend, cousin or niece so they can learn.

countercockwisecountercockwiseover 6 years ago

hot ideas duurwood.. I hope the writers sees your comments and uses in a new truck stop story

countercockwisecountercockwiseover 6 years ago

maybe title it : I killed mom by repeatedly sneaking back to truck stop for more cock and tricked my relatives into doing it too.

feedingtheratsfeedingtheratsover 6 years ago

Count me in.. I'de read a story like below mentioned. Sounds like it could be a great one.

owneroffewwordsowneroffewwordsover 6 years ago

they both need to go out on the road, with two different Mexican men, in separate trucks, meeting up from time to time at truck stops where they see each others swollen bellies after spending 5 months on the road.

Mixedmind16Mixedmind16over 6 years ago

owneroffewwords I like that idea too. contact cindy and she may start a new story for you and I and NOT FINISH IT TOO!

eatyourverbschildeatyourverbschildover 6 years ago

good point mixedmind16 but don't give up just yet, the writer may surprise us.

xpressherxpressherover 6 years ago

chances are high that they both will give alberto a baby.

writingNcircleswritingNcirclesover 6 years ago

Truck stops.... Gotta love um.

relaxativepillrelaxativepillover 6 years ago

could only give a four here but most of the other stories got fives

ytnaptewytnaptewover 6 years ago

yes please... more..

sober71sober71over 6 years ago
Loving the beginning

Has loads of scope, good beginning.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Please --- More!

Title says it all!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

love all the specific details. ends at a point that is making me go read part 2, can't wait to see what happens next! --russeltrust

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I hope to see both of them bred to Alberto's big dark Mexican cock. Swollen bellies and titties.

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