All Comments on 'MG 210: An Intro to Tentacles'

Love that you put the full buildup and starter kit in the first one.

Logically though... next chapter has some challenges. Give gifts is so much more satisfying than receiving them- so we're told. There's also that slip of paper to worry about.

Nice intro. Just loved this story as I also love breast play, attention to breasts and nipples is orgasmic. The sensations just touch everywhere inside. Like being in a constant state of arousal. Thank you for writing this looking forward to more maybe a part 2

That was alot of fun, please write lots more bout these two women, they look as if they will have a long and very happy relationship, great work.

Not normally a fan of tentacle stories but this one is great, can't wait for the next part!

Please,write more chapters:))

Even though a fantasy story, it makes me, as a male, realize how women are so much more superior at being able to satisfy other women that I am surprised they even allow men to try with our weak inability to measure up to women's strengths.

this is cool have a star

Lizzy is for certain (from what I gathered) a virgin but when the tentacles penetrate her there is no mention of her virtue. It's a pretty big inconsistency in a otherwise great story.

Excellent! Damn I feel so jealous that this won't happen to me :( Come on virtual reality, develop faster!

Very arousing. I feel no shame in saying I wish I could be either one of those girls

I want more of this story as well for the same reason that I wrote in the other comments on this subject to see and read how far the relationship went on between them and if they got married, and if Lizzy got pregnant by her, and did Mallory impregnate her body with a lot of her little tentacle alien babies/half tentacle alien babies - half human female babies, and did Lizzy get pregnant over and over again by Mallory for all eternity/another words for the rest of her life. Thank you very much.

I know you don't post anymore, but if You somehow read this, please continue this story. Perhaps with more shenanigans and exploration of the otherworldly?

Regardless, great story,!

Really nice

The story was really nice

Sexy but also very sweet and tender. I’d love to read more about these two. I like how Lizzy chucked her religious raising/beliefs out the window as soon as the tentacles came out. Very relatable