All Comments on 'Mi Familia Ch. 08'

Great, but to short. I love how Jared says "I love you both" Really Hot.

I agree too short. I would have liked for you to have let us be there for their first time together. I felt like the chapter barely got off the ground when it ended. I do like how you've expressed Jarad's emotions and made the reader feel bad for him feeling left out and not knowing how to deal with his emotions for the other two.

Hi too you both. I appreciate the comments.

The problem here is Literotica limits what I can write meaning the sex between Vince and Diante' cannot be shown in the story. I have a hot one coming up with them as adults that I hope will make up for it.

Glad to see people are still reading.

More complete versions are posted on my blog and the GayDemon.com site.

The best is http://tabooindeed.blogspot.com. The next part will be posted on Friday.

Mmmh, I'm liking this...