All Comments on 'Mia Masturbates Ch. 01'

Continue the story with several of the staff. Keep up the work.

You write with a nice balance of feeling and energy; I gave it four stars. I hope you will write several more chapters, as this is obviously a prelude. There were a few missed words, incorrect tenses and so on, so you might like to seek an editor for future chapters. Don't let this comment deter you though, because you've made a good start here.

Vince